And so it begins....
Ryan as boom operator |
Hello world. I am a high school student documenting their journey through the world of media studies. Feel free to take a look and stick around with me for the journey.
And so it begins....
Ryan as boom operator |
Hey everybody! Today, Ryan and I went over to BECON-TV and picked up our new rental equipment that they would lend out to us in order to help us film Cutting Room Floor. Needless to say, we are extremely pleased with what we were able to check out. Jim was very helpful and eager to offer us whatever kind of equipment would be useful in helping us to get the highest quality of production for our film.
We had requested ahead of time a boom mic, light kits, and a monitor. Jim went above and beyond giving us a clapboard for us to sync video and audio, a boom mic that can record internally and into the camera, Canon lenses for my camera, a wired and wireless video monitor, and even a mist machine! Ryan and I walked out feeling over the moon and like we were real film directors using real Hollywood-like equipment. We are very excited to put this hardware to good use :)
Clapboard slate + Mist Machine |
New Lenses |
Lady Bird (2017) |
Us (2019) |
Truman Show (1998) |
El Camino (2019) |
Stranger things (2016- ) |
Split Lighting |
Rim Lighting |
Loop Lighting |
Hello everyone! I have some new on our music situation! Out of the two record companies I have contacted for licensing in our films, Epic and Matador Records respectively, only one has contacted me back: Matador. The lady who I was in contact with was very kind and responded rather quick; only a day after my initial e-mail was when she responded. She asked a couple of questions regarding where I was located and to whom the film would be shown to. I had explained to her that the film was going to be shown to my class, but also be sent off to Cambridge for grading. Additionally, I made mention of the fact that my group and I are most likely going to send this film off to film festivals within the US. Afterwards, she gave this response:
Just as I mentioned in the previous script update, our script is a living document. And this document has been revised once more; albeit, for a more conclusive time.
Some updates we made included: shortening of the opening scene, revised scene and character descriptions, a few tweaks to the ending confrontation, and a new ending entirely (same idea of protagonist getting their own script, but different execution.
Ryan has added notes and comments to the screenplay online that will help Eddy in creating the storyboards for our film. With all these revisions and markups, my group is happy to say that this version should be the closest to what the end product will turn out to be and are ready to help bring these words on paper to life.
You can view our completed script here.
In terms of our film, the visual is only half the battle that we have tackled head on, now it is time for audio; more specifically, our non-diegetic sound.
For our soundtrack to the movie, we will use resources such as copyright free songs on YouTube, filmstro.com, and freesounds.org for any special sound effects. We will need to gather a rather large array of royalty-free music in order to ensure all the different film genres and scenes have the appropriate soundtrack to go along with what is happening on screen.
An aspect of this journey that we are wanting to go the extra mile for is for the ability to implement copyrighted songs that we ourselves are huge fans of and want to add these songs as a cameo to our film, as well as these songs have always been songs we have always thought of putting into a film.
The songs are:
In order to produce our film at the highest quality that we are aiming for, we have gathered a list of all the equipment my group and I own and what we will use in order to produce the project.
I, Oliver, will use my own:
Hello everyone! Today during my class, my teacher arranged our class and had us meet in groups to discuss how all of our projects have been going and for any feedback we could give one another. This is our second round of group meetings and it has been a couple of weeks ago since our first union, so it was exciting to see how everyone's progress and ideas would have developed since then. When we met up, we had a good and positive energy among us which helped for us to give critiques well. I was the first one to go and as soon as I described the plot for my group's film, everyone's face lit up. They all loved the idea and were really excited to see how it would go. I let everyone know how we have a finished script, production schedule, and how we organized the work among my group. For the most part, everyone in my group meeting was all for my idea, but I did ask for critiques on the film's ending. I had asked whether to leave it more open ended and ambiguous or to have something more structured and definite. They decided on the latter in order to prevent from confusing the audience and getting our point across. This is something I will be bringing up with my group to ensure our movie ends on not confusing and satisfying note.
As my group and I have progressed and focused more and more on the pre-production side of our short film, it begs to wonder how our production stage will go. Since the last blog post I made about our schedule, we decided that we would have to change our dates in order to accommodate for all of our schedules and the time we have spent on just planning alone.
Our new production schedule from this point forward will go like this:
After keeping in mind the feedback from our teacher, as well as my group and I reading over the script and discussing how our film would play out, the general themes of the piece, and how the different elements we hope to keep in our film would work with one another; we have finally come to a complete and prepared script.
Hey everyone! During my last class, my team and I decided to take a step back and ask for some feedback from our teacher regarding our script, story, and ideas we have regarding our short film. Safe to say that the meeting went very well. My teacher had already viewed a draft of our screenplay via our last blog, so she already had a good idea on what the synopsis for our film would be about. Thankfully, she really liked our idea!
We discussed aspects, such as:
Since my last blogpost, the team and I have been hard at work with our film screenplay. Not only did we begin writing the screenplay for the actual film (as opposed to the script that would be used for a prop within the movie) this week, but we have made significant progress on our script.
We are up to 8 pages and have a completed rough draft of our story. As we were reading back this first draft, a concern that came about among us was regarding our time limit. We have to keep our short film within a 5-minute window. With our script already at 8 pages and us still wanting to add scenes and revise more aspects of our storyline, this time constraint could prove a bit of a challenge for us creatively.
As of right now, the storyline of our film involves our main character, dubbed "The Protagonist", who is introduced in the film as the main character within a stereotypical coming-of-age film; until, he doesn't want to follow his line and breaks the 4th wall by speaking to the narrator directly. After a back and forth between protagonist and narrator, the narrator proceeds to put the protagonist in several different types of movies and genres that ultimately end in a standoff between one another. The ending would then have the protagonist and the narrator meet up face to face in person in which the narrator hands a script to the protagonist, symbolizing the protagonist (literally) writing his own future and story.
In order to further add to the script in detail, we will be researching different stereotypes and conventions of several movie genres that we could poke fun of and reference via the protagonist's adventures. We will be further revising and brainstorming ideas and concepts we can play around with and utilize to improve our short film.
Our draft can be viewed right here.
I've begun writing the scripts for our short film ( a slippery slope as I have to make both a script to be used within the film and one that is for our film as a whole). So as of late, it has been a lot of...
Source: Nickelodeon |
In order to compose this script, I was just thinking of typical "youth coming of age films" and how I would start one off. The one line the protagonist has at the end of the page is where he would (quite literally) go off script. This is an opening and sequence of events that are simple, but I know our team can add a lot of personal touch and style to the shots.
When it comes to the script of the actual film, I've been taking notes from all kinds of films like, Stranger than Fiction, that I already discussed, and Scott Pilgrim vs The World. Films that are not only very meta, but edited in a very stylized manner ie. heavy use of text and graphics to accentuate the events of the film and precise cuts. Approximately one and a half pages of the film have been written, but I still got quite a bit to go and still need to discuss with my team for their opinions. But hey, these things don't write themselves!
Well, the time has finally come for our film to have a name and it is one that I think is awesome and very well suiting. Our title is... *drum roll please*
Cutting Room Floor
This idea came from my group partner, Ryan and was the one who taught me and explained to me what this term is because I had never heard of it before. Cutting room floor is used in the film industry as a figure of speech referring to unused or scrapped footage not included in the finished film. Outside of the film industry, it may refer to any creative work unused in the final product.
Source: El Space |
Hey everyone! Today during class my group and I came up with a more cohesive outline now that the rough idea has become more and more completed. A big factor that we came to change was that we would now have one protagonist as opposed to two. This was done in order for the sake of character development and to not overcomplicate the story progression. Having one central driving force would make more sense and can focus on the individual in a more complex manner. The other driving force would now be the narrator of the film who the two main characters meet at the end and where the protagonist is handed the script for the film and becomes "his own main character."
Our updated outline is here:
CHARACTERS
Protagonist - Supposed to be perfect
Narrator (VO) - In control of the narrative
OUTLINE
Shrek Opening
Scene Description - Motion Graphics
Protagonist goes off script/Main character does not say their (full) line
Cuts to IRL scene/Script
Narrator: “What are you doing?”
Protagonist: “I'm not a fan of this script”
Narrator: “Wdym? You’re the main character!”
Protagonist: “I’m going to make some changes”
Narrator: “No, wait!”
Title Card
Next scene with description on scene (First act of film)
Main character messes up/refuses to act properly
Next scene with description on scene (Second act of film)
Main character messes up/refuses to act properly
Next scene with description on scene (Third act of film)
Narrator: “This is the last scene, the climax, you’ve gotta get this right!”
Main character almost perfectly completes script and then starts breaking into laughter
Protagonist: “This scene is so stupid!”
Narrator: “You know what?”
Narrator teleports them to empty white void, like the screenplay itself
Final argument (Protagonist: “Why would I want to live by someone else’s rules… The only line I’m going to follow is his own”)
Narrator hands him the script, pans up to reveal the narrator is now the protagonist, he controls the narrative
FAKE MOVIE
The fake movie is a coming of age story, parodying the same stories romanticized by teens
Coming age of story is
The protagonist is written to be a perfect, flawless character
Opening -
Scene 1 - Skating in neighborhood, Library, getting out of school, at home getting ready for school, football field
Scene 2 - Reminiscing childhood
Scene 3 - Outside during sunset reflecting on his future
*sigh* The time has come. The last blogpost. The short film has been finalized, our project components have been finished, and I can now ta...